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Entanglement

September 18, 2013 Leave a comment Go to comments

for the woman I saw this morning on the sidewalk outside a Planet Fitness, wearing jorts, drinking coffee out of a to-go cup, and smoking a cigarette.

I’ll begin by admitting
that my entire train of thought this morning
as I worked my way through elliptical,
lower body, and arms
which is where I saw you,
as I was resting between sets
seated at a machine
which is a clear violation of protocol
at all the many gyms I’ve been a member of

may be based on fallacy. You may
have looked through the glass at us
and thought haha losers in which case
you are philosophically miles ahead
of this chautauqua

but you looked so ill at ease
and seemed to be avoiding
the collective plate-glass glare
of twenty or thirty people
who have the time and energy
to work out before they go to work

and you may have felt
that we were judging you
but Martha, if I may call you that
on the million-to-one chance
that’s your name

Planet Fitness is a Judgement Free Zone
or so the advertisements say
and they have no more reason to lie
than any of the other signs
at the aging shopping center
where we work out or
could get a EASY PAYDAY LOAN
or enjoy a FARM FRESH BREAKFAST
at a diner which sits next to
the Family Drug Store Where the Customer Comes First
and down at the end,
which is what I suspect you were waiting for,
having bought foam cup coffee at the diner
and perhaps the cigarettes at the Wholesale Tobacco Outlet
there is the Independent Auto Company
which has a GOOD MECHANIC ON DUTY.

And I hope he had good news for you
or at least was truthful if he said
If you was my mamma I wouldn’t let you leave here with them brakes.

Because honestly Wilma, or whoever you are,
we’re all caught in a web of limited ways and means,
and we choose from the choices we have.
After you left I showered, dressed, and went to my office,
feeling a little virtuous and smug, like I’d gotten ahead of something.

My first call when I got there was to Verizon,
and it took me two hours to undo everything
they’d done to my account the day before.

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  1. September 18, 2013 at 9:28 pm

    we are all caught in a web of limited ways and means…true that…and we all have to make those choices…ha. and that is why we no longer have verizon…we are all not that much differnt…

    • September 18, 2013 at 9:31 pm

      that would be the web of limited choices, is why I’m not gone yet.

  2. September 18, 2013 at 9:30 pm

    vitreous?!? crap. Edit time.

  3. September 19, 2013 at 12:07 pm

    Gary, your poem literally blew me away – the flow, the address, but more the honesty i felt come through. Loved the way you made me feel I knew that place, the gym, the mall and surrounding businesses with their suspect promises. And the perfect ending… Crazy world, huh? But the best and (if I can put it that way) refreshing poem I’ve read in a long while.

    • September 21, 2013 at 9:04 pm

      Thank you!

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