The sun was starting to get a little low
when I parked the car in a parking deck
in Jacksonville where I took Southwest to Oakland
We stopped somewhere in Nevada
When I parked the car in a parking deck
I left everything but a suitcase behind
When we stopped somewhere in Nevada
I bought sunglasses to replace ones I forgot
I walked along rolling a suitcase behind me.
I boarded a bus to get to the rail line
I had bought earbuds to replace ones I forgot
I went down the stairs to the long tunnel
I boarded a bus because the rail line
only took me within a mile of my hotel
I’d walked down the stairs from the platform
The sun stung my eyes when it left the tunnel
I was less than a mile from my hotel
when I started walking along the sidewalk
The sun stung my eyes at the intersections
I checked in and changed to a tux
When I started walking along the sidewalk
to go to the banquet I’d come for
I checked the windows for the change a tux made
A San Franciscan with a Pentax took my picture
I’d arrived at the banquet I’d come for
All the miles behind me at last
The event photographer took my picture
I took a cigarette although I don’t smoke
All the miles behind me at last
I was seated with seven people who don’t know me.
I took a cigarette although I don’t smoke
and I waited at a bar when it was over
I was standing with four people who know me
I took a cigarette even though it didn’t fit the form
and we waited at a bar after it was over
talking about Jack Kerouac because it’s what we do
I smoked a cigarette and I talked about form
over substance at a party where no one gets along
and recited Allen Ginsberg until they took me home
in a cab which saved some tedious doubling back
I read a USA Today for four hours in the airport
in Oakland where I took Southwest to Jacksonville
by way of Love Field, Texas
The sun was starting to get a little low
haha this is brilliant…a traveling poem for sure…and love the ref to ginsberg and keroac as well…it fits and you play the form seemless as well…
I gather this is a business person beat, sort of on the road in that sort of class. nice
http://leah-jamielynn.typepad.com/blog/2012/04/a-day-on-the-platform.html
Haha – for the sort of character I had in mind, think Don Draper but on a tighter budget. 🙂
haha..this is great…thanks for taking us with you on the trip…loved all the details and kerouac of course…nice
A man has to go down that his road! Good to see a form being used.
This is so well done! Really enjoyed it.
love the way you penned this. Every line a virtual complete sentence, an action upon action. A true example of a traveling poem, and the two references to Kerouac and Ginsberg were very nice touches. Thanks