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A series of moments on Hwy. 167

I bought a brown felt hat in a western store
wearing it with the sunroof open I
heard birds
the squeaky axle on a truck
smelled grass just cut
felt sunlight in the shade of its brim
a rushing roar, the radio off.

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  1. March 30, 2012 at 5:56 pm

    You did such a good job engaging the senses on this one. Liked the smelled grass just cut, especially.

  2. March 30, 2012 at 8:29 pm

    felt sunlight in the shade of its brim

    Sounds like an enjoyable ride! 🙂

  3. March 31, 2012 at 12:12 pm

    My new car has one of these. I’m still pushing the buttons. Wow. Think you captured it – all in the “right now”. Well done.

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