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Comment on The Dream of Walking by claudia

claudia — Sun, 19 May 2013 06:25:51 +0000

oh i know what you mean…i spent a week in the hospital as well a while ago, wasn’t allowed to leave the bed and it’s a big present to be able to walk again..something we usually take for granted..we shouldn’t…

Comment on Celebrity by Gary

Gary — Fri, 08 Mar 2013 04:43:43 +0000

I will admit to pining for the road.

Comment on Celebrity by Gary

Gary — Fri, 08 Mar 2013 04:42:50 +0000

Thanks to you and to everyone who commented!

Comment on Donut Shop Moment by Gary

Gary — Fri, 08 Mar 2013 04:41:41 +0000

Thanks everyone for the kind words!

Comment on Celebrity by hobgoblin2011

hobgoblin2011 — Wed, 06 Mar 2013 10:41:51 +0000

scene painted nicely, love the images of the smoking, parenthetical is great there, and great ending, especially the final line, nicely done.

Comment on Celebrity by indieflower

indieflower — Wed, 06 Mar 2013 03:54:02 +0000

Fantastic. Exceptional writing. I especially like the opening: “But you’re the diffident one
who has trouble looking me in the eye.”

Comment on Celebrity by brian miller

brian miller — Wed, 06 Mar 2013 03:36:15 +0000

smiles…there is something of buskers…a magic romaticism…
wishing you made more of yourself…maybe pining a bit for their road?

Comment on Donut Shop Moment by hobgoblin2011

hobgoblin2011 — Mon, 04 Mar 2013 19:14:03 +0000

very cool, love pavlovian anticipation, really creative. Thanks

Comment on Donut Shop Moment by aka_andrea

aka_andrea — Mon, 04 Mar 2013 12:34:55 +0000

delicious! let’s go!

Comment on Donut Shop Moment by Gary

Gary — Mon, 04 Mar 2013 12:17:28 +0000

Did I not cut and paste my own link in right? Sorry about that.